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Can anyone help me edit the grammar and punctuation errors in this paragraph from my essay?

Next, I would choose to take my scrapbook which is filled with valuable photographs and letters from my friends and family. Pictures are significant to me because they seem to immortalize one moment in time and capture a memory. My friends and family are very important to me, and having a small piece of them […]

What do you think about my intro? Any grammatical errors? What can I change to make it better?

This is the introduction to my essay about legalizing the death penalty. Criminals are people who do wrong to others. They rob banks, steal cars, and kill people. Because of these evil deeds, when they are caught, they are put in jail. The world would be a safer place without criminals; children would be able […]

Can someone check my essay errors please?

Different between generationsEvery generation of people is different in different ways. Nowadays, my generation is different with my grandparents’ generation. There are much developments and new technologies have been used than previously, the women were not educated. On the other hand, only men were allowed to worked, and people had been more sociable.Nowadays, we had […]

Can some one pls pls proofread my essay? and correct all my errors, pls pls help, the essay is 3 paragraphs ?

Heres the essay pls proofread and correct: The two stories that we recently just read in English Class isThe Jury of her peers by Susan Graspell and On the Rainy River by Tim O’ Brien. In Both stories the main characters are put under pressure when faced intricatewith dillemas. The characters must learn how to […]

Please proof read my essay and correct errors best answers to the 1st and best poster :D?

Slavery according to Dictionary.com is the state of being controlled by another person under force. We as Americans have experienced slavery first hand during the colonial times when this nation was on its peek of progression. Slavery did not just take place in our homeland it accrued in many places such as china, Japan and […]

Are there any grammatical errors or awkward phrasing in this paragraph?

A few weeks before my first semester of college, I read an exceptional self-help book, titled Study Smarter, Not Harder by author Kevin Paul. The book taught me a vast amount of memory exercises, the importance of goal-setting, and how to improve my concentration. However, there is one crucial tip that has led me to […]

Read my essay and check for errors! easy 10 pts :D Essay is on ..Describe an unexpected discovery?

The moon gave way to the sun with a sigh. A few high clouds drifted lazily across the azure blue sky. The bright, smiling sun peeped from the clouds. As rays of sunlight pierced through the windows of my room, the alarm clock rang loudly, jangling to all and sundry that it was 9 o’clock. […]

Is this a good essay? Can you help me correct any errors?

What errors do you see hereAm I on track with the topicCan you correct my mistakesThe topic of this essay is>>>> There have been many technological discoveries and advancements that have occurred in your lifetime. All of them thanks to great individuals who demonstrate for a passion for STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering and Math). The […]

What details can I add to my essay? Also, what errors do you see?

The short stories “Lamb to the Slaughter” and “A Jury of her Peers” are two very similar stories about women who commit the same unspeakable crime: murder. Throughout the two stories, both authors include certain aspects and elements to their writing that make these stories appear remarkably similar. However, as with every story there are […]

Wanted highly qualified English professors/teachers to correct essays of ESL students for grammatical errors.?

They are at free to work from their home/office with a computer to receive & send essays in word/text format.Can do this either as part time/full time for a reasonable remuneration. The only criteria is that they should be well versed in grammar.Interested parties may contact immediately.