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Can anyone help me edit the grammar and punctuation errors in this paragraph from my essay?

Next, I would choose to take my scrapbook which is filled with valuable photographs and letters from my friends and family. Pictures are significant to me because they seem to immortalize one moment in time and capture a memory. My friends and family are very important to me, and having a small piece of them […]

Please edit my college admissions essay?

1 In your opinion, what is the difference between intelligence and wisdom? You may cite a historical or fictional example, or offer an illustration from your own experience.150 word limit, currently at 146 The importance of upbringing becomes clear while contrasting intelligence with wisdom. We use our intelligence to gather information from our experiences, but […]

Anyone willing to edit and correct my essay? Very short..?

PUNCTUATIONS AND GRAMMARS PARTICULARLY and phrasing as well Joan of Arc was born to peasant parents at the small village of Domremy,near the province of Lorraine; which may have accounted for Joan’s labelthe “Maid of Lorraine”.She is the patroness of soldiers and of France. Joan didn’t have any noble or aristocratic background before she was […]

Could you give me suggestions about my essay to make it better, and edit it please, i am in eighth grade?

Click! Flash, Flash, Flash! Animations are running through the page, with the greatest designs on the computer popping out of the screen! Where does this come from? Can I be in this business? The answer to these questions is yes! My dream job is to be an art director for an advertising company. I began […]

Please edit my essay?

My family all speak russian so they can’t help me. I would love it if somone would look over my essay (: I am entering a blog contest my essay needs to have detail and my expirence. Im not done writing it yet so I would love some feedback.Journey Back in TimeI felt a tapping […]

Would someone please read and edit my college essay?

I just started writing it and the deadline is very soon. I am really nervous and would like some one to read it to let me know if i am on a good track or if i should change everything. I am nervous to put it on Yahoo Answers but since I am not near […]

Can someone please edit or proofread my essay,rate it or something, im begging you?

Its due in english tomorrow, and MS word is being stupid. Ill give u high rating and lots of points.Here it is:Isaac BritoMs. Gillis/Period 319 September 2011 The Beggar King EssayIn Izzy’s The Beggar King (216 pages), there are many unique folktales from around the world. Each folktale is paired up with a story from […]

Can someone please proofread and edit my essay please?

The treatment process of aroma therapy is finding the physically and mentally oils that suits the person. A single or two or three oils that he or she may recommend. Carrier oil is when the practitioner mixes the oils the oil can be applied when you are having a message. Some of the oils may […]

Can someone please edit my essay. ?

One of the areas social workers aim for is the equality and well-being of individuals, families, women and children that are subjected to living in poverty. They want to help individuals overcome life challenges and problems like poverty and give individuals the help they need from the best resources available. Poverty is a major concern […]

Can you please edit my Romeo and Juliet essay intro?

Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare is a tragic story about two teenagers destined for love whose untimely deaths ultimately unite the feuding households. The story reveals two characters (Romeo and Juliet) that are prohibited from seeing each other by an ongoing feud. Eventually it led to Romeo and Juliet taking their own lives. Whilst […]