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Is there a better way to improve your vocab/literary skills without having to develop a reading habit?

I’m gonna be completely honest, I HATE reading. I’ve tried. I just can’t. Can’t indulge myself into any book I put my hands on. I don’t know how my ‘bookworm’ friends do it, I’ve always admired their love for reading because writing seemed so effortless to them. It doesn’t take the bookworms I know quite […]

HELP! please just tell me one or two things to make this short essay better! it is for college!?

This is the question: Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, . etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.  
 
 Under my feet, the light grey cement barrier trembles as the furious waves of the dark blue seas thrash up […]

Reword this to sound better best gets 10 points i promise!?

The adults contrast with the children during the play. The adults somehow act immature and the children seem more grown up. For example, the adults have an argument at any situation, while Anne and Peter are thinking more differently and growing up. As a result Anne gets everyone presents for Hanukkah to try and make […]

Could you give me suggestions about my essay to make it better, and edit it please, i am in eighth grade?

Click! Flash, Flash, Flash! Animations are running through the page, with the greatest designs on the computer popping out of the screen! Where does this come from? Can I be in this business? The answer to these questions is yes! My dream job is to be an art director for an advertising company. I began […]

Help me revise this…. Its philo paper. I can’t think of a title. I’m looking to make it better..?

(FIRST PART THE ESSAY IS TO LONG TO PUT ON HERE)Explain and evaluate Socrates’ arguments in the Meno for and against the claim that virtue is knowledge and so teachable. How does he try to resolve the matter in the end of the dialogue? Which position seems most reasonable to you? Why?In Plato’s dialogue Socrates […]

How can I make this sound better?

The path to success will always hold true for anyone wishing to dedicate themselves. While it is true that Ender was born with a much higher intelligence level, who’s to say that his skill couldn’t have been wasted? Because of his continued training in Battle School, Command School, and the people he worked with, Ender […]

Does anyone have any suggestions about making my first paragraph better?

Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has madean impact on your life and explain how and why this person is importantto you. that is my prompt and i was wondering if i could get some honest answers about what i have so far as my introtuction…any SERIOUS answers would be […]

What do you think about my intro? Any grammatical errors? What can I change to make it better?

This is the introduction to my essay about legalizing the death penalty. Criminals are people who do wrong to others. They rob banks, steal cars, and kill people. Because of these evil deeds, when they are caught, they are put in jail. The world would be a safer place without criminals; children would be able […]

Is there a better way to improve your vocab/literary skills without having to develop a reading habit?

I’m gonna be completely honest, I HATE reading. I’ve tried. I just can’t. Can’t indulge myself into any book I put my hands on. I don’t know how my ‘bookworm’ friends do it, I’ve always admired their love for reading because writing seemed so effortless to them. It doesn’t take the bookworms I know quite […]

Can you rephrase these sentences for me, so that I may understand them better?

I have an essay i have to type up on the Scarlet letter, and these topics make no sence to me. So, if you can, just please rephrase it for me so that i may better understand them.1.) Identify Puritan morality reflected in today’s world2.) Difine teh moral conflict in today’s worldMY english isnt so […]