College Essay Thesis Statement HELP/THOUGHTS? PLEASE?

Im doing my final essay for my english class on THE BLACK PRINCE by Iris Murdoch. The Thesis statement that came up with is "Murdoch uses the characters in the story to convey the message that marriage never works out as planned." What are your thoughts on this thesis statement? Can i add something or is it fine as it is? It would really help if you read the book or know somewhat about it. THANKS For Your Time & Thoughts

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One Response to “College Essay Thesis Statement HELP/THOUGHTS? PLEASE?”

  1. esorics says:

    At what level? In a first year course I’d say pretty good. In an advanced Lit course it would be rather bland.