Could anyone check for me..Grammar mistakes?





Vegetarianism has become popular around the world. The global citizens nowadays are very concern and cautious about their health and it is proven that a vegan's life span has increased tremendously as they are free from most of the fatal diseases such as obesity , hypertension and other meat-borne diseases. Vegetarian can be further divided into three, which is lacto-ovo vegetarian, semi-vegetarian and pure vegetarian. Lacto-ovo vegetarians are people who do not eat meat but they do consume animal products such as eggs , milk, butter and yogurts. On the other hand, semi vegetarians are peoples who consume dairy products but not eggs. Lastly, pure vegetarians do not consume any animal oriented product and also does not eat tuber vegetables such as garlic and onion.Please tell me how to improve...I am having problems in writing essays as my grammar is not good.



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2 Responses to “Could anyone check for me..Grammar mistakes?”

  1. htparse says:

    Vegetarianism has become popular around the world. The global citizens nowadays are very concernED and cautious about their health and it HAS BEEN proved that a vegan’s life span has increased tremendously as they are free from most of the fatal diseases such as obesity , hypertension and other meat-borne diseases. Vegetarian can be further divided into three, which is lacto-ovo vegetarian, semi-vegetarian and pure vegetarian. Lacto-ovo vegetarians are people who do not eat meat but they do consume animal products such as eggs, milk, butter, and yogurts. On the other hand, semi vegetarians are peoples who consume dairy products but not eggs. Lastly, pure vegetarians do not consume any animal oriented product and also does not eat tuber vegetables such as garlic and onion.One way i check my Grammar is by reading my essays out loud, you really find a lot when you do that way. But the only other way is to just practice. i only found two mistakes i think you are actually really good. Just remember nobody is perfect.Hope i helped

  2. unrestrainably says:

    Vegetarianism has become popular around the world. The global citizens nowadays are very concerned and cautious about their health and it is proven that a vegan’s life span has increased tremendously, as they are free from most of the fatal diseases such as obesity , hypertension and other meat-borne diseases. Vegetarians can be further divided into three categories, which are lacto-ovo vegetarian, semi-vegetarian and pure vegetarian. Lacto-ovo vegetarians are people who do not eat meat, but do consume animal products such as eggs , milk, butter and yogurts. On the other hand, semi vegetarians are peoples who consume dairy products but not eggs. Lastly, pure vegetarians do not consume any animal oriented products, and do not eat tuber vegetables such as garlic and onion.