Using second-person in College essays!?





okay i know you cant use second person in essays....but i know what i want to say i just cant think of how to write it so its not in second person....soo if anyone could re-word this for me that would be awesome! "You've seen news reports about ppl who need assistance after a natural disaster or animals in need. Maybe you've walked past ppl who are living on the streets. Volunteering gives you an oppertunity to change peoples lives, including your own. when you see things like these and your feeling exasperated...."i know these are probably things right under my nose that i should notice, but ive been workin on this soo long my mind is just so strained.



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One Response to “Using second-person in College essays!?”

  1. MIA says:

    *Indent* I have seen, numerous, news reports about people or animals needing assistance, after a natural disaster. Perhaps I have even walked past some who are living on the streets. When I see things such as this, I feel exasperated. *Indent* Volunteering will give me an opportunity to try and change the lives of those less fortunate than myself. It will enrich my life, as well.