I am writing a persuasive essay and I was just wondering what other words can i put in for “I”?





This is the sentence ..In conclusion, I would like to say that I believe that these couples will be able to overcome those unwanted opinions and raise a magnificent family unit!



Similar Asks:

  • Why don’t people like racial diversity/interracial couples? - Im doing an essay and for part of it i need opinions and/or proof of why people dont like racial diversity/interracial couples. Opinions?
  • Family topics for essay? - i have to do an essay in my english class, and the broad topic is Family. i have to narrow down the topic, whether its “Why Gay Couples should be Able to Marry”, “How teen pregnncies affect families”, “How Divorces affect children”, etc.Does any of you have any other interesting family topic ideas?! thanks
  • What is a synonym for “in the minority”? - i need another way to end this sentence because i’ve already said minority and majority enough times in my essay:the freedom to express opinions does not exclude those opinions in the minority
  • I need help with CSS? - Here is what I have to do:1. Open your Webmaster essay that you wrote for Unit 1. OK2. Copy and paste the text into Notepad. OK3. Do “Save As” and change the extension from txt to html. OK4. Use internal CSS to set the properties for the page. ?5. You should have the following items in your CSS: Background color,
  • Conclusion editing help? - I am writing an essay on marriage in the Elizabethan Era and need a little help with my conclusion. I will give ten points as soon as possible to whomever (or is is whoever…) helps me the most. Thank you so much!so here is my conclusion so far:In conclusion, marriage during the Victorian and Elizabethan
  • Topic for my ethnic notions paper i really need help!? - we just finnished a unit about sterotypes of african americans through the first half of the 1900s. and things like chracateur and the whole jim crow, mammy, picaninny stuff and how on televisionseries it showed how slaves “enjoyed” doing work for white americans.i need to write an essay on the unit and i need a
  • Ideas to introduce my essay on china’s one child policy? i’m against it? - with or against, your gonna have to accept it, china is overpopulated and that is probably the best idea of helping the population but i’ll give idea’s in your point of view, their maybe couples who want 1 or more children as there are many people who wants a family, their may be kids who




One Response to “I am writing a persuasive essay and I was just wondering what other words can i put in for “I”?”

  1. dales says:

    Maybe you can edit a little to: In conclusion, I believe that couples will be able to overcome those unwanted opinions and raise a magnificent family unit. I cancelled out the ”I would like to say” because it has almost the same meaning as ”I believe”. I changed the exclamation mark(!) to a full-stop(.) as I’m not sure what is your essay content and the sentence does not sound like it’ has stress on it. Hope this helps:D